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Broken Pieces

Post  Chidori on Sat Mar 06, 2010 1:42 am

Chidori Vs Raito Kaguya

Chidori continued to walk within the room, not a sound could be heard besides his own footsteps and loud heartbeat. The very thought of making it this far and so close to his goal was making him nervous, every step he took made him notice all the things he could have done better and prevented alot of things by doing so. He could have arrived earlier, he could have spared the lives of all those he had took, he could have paid more attention to the girl he loved, he could have prevented it all if he had just stayed with her. Among all the other thoughts was one, dark, powerful, dangerous thought. One he had always locked outside of his mind but still knew it was outside waiting to be let in. No matter how hard it knocked, he refused to let it in, no matter how hard it kicked and banged on the door of his mind he refused. Opening his mind for a brief second to realize how everything could've been prevented if he had done only one thing right, Opening his mind to possibilities even for a second allowed a dark possibility within his mind along with all the goods ones. The thought that she never would want to see his face again after what he put her threw, after he had abandoned her. His eyes became teary at just the thought and he stopped walking for a moment thinking long and hard about just that before beginning to walk further to the door. By now he could hear it, all so clearly, the breathing behind the door, it was fast and rapid, it was the breathing of someone scared, someone frightened. Chidori felt a breeze of air pass threw his hair before he turned back to see if he had left the door open but instead of seeing the rest of the empty room he saw a boy with silver hair and green eyes in front of him, hand clinched into a fist that was headed towards his face. It was too late to attempt to block the too fast and sudden attack and the punch connected with no sign of resistance and Chidori was knocked off his feet and flew a two feet and slided across the floor several inches. The boy's fist felt as if it had been made with iron and Chidori knew the difference cause he had ran into iron many times. Chidori scurried to his feet holding his head in pain before reaching to draw one of his swords before noticing the boy had already began to rush towards him. Drawing his sword would have to wait, with but two seconds Chidori braced himself for impact by placing both his arms in front of his face but still the hardness of the boy's fist felt as if another punch with snap Chidori's arms in two. Chidori yelped in pain as he hit the wall of the room, sending cracks up and down the ceiling and floor. The boy began to smirk and he opened up his palm and sharp object began to push out of the boy's hand, it was not metal but was none other than a bone. "I would think that someone like you would be much stronger and faster but you're just a pushover...makes my job easier" he said as Chidori got to his feet and drew his sword from the sheath on his back. "With your speed you don't really expect to touch me with that thing do you?" the boy said as Chidori's eyes faded into crimson red and the boy began to stare at his eyes for a moment before smirking. He waved his hands towards Chidori before spotting Chidori having already deflected the silently fired bulletspeed bones. "Im impressed...slightly" the boy said before beginning to run towards Chidori but when he noticed the boy's eyes followed his every movement he began to run in a zigzag pattern before swiping horizontally towards Chidori before noticing Chidori had grabbed hold of his arm and kicked off his shoulder. "Wha?" the boy asked himself in bewilderment before feeling the pain of a cut upon his shoulder going down his back. "You aren't so fast anymore...In fact you've become quite slow" he heard the voice of Chidori come from behind him. As he turned to look at Chidori he smiled knowing the boy's voice was very close to him but when he felt Chidori's fist against his face he smiled even more before Chidori leaped back holding his hand and looking towards him. "So you use your very bones to attack..." Chidori said as he analyzed his opponent "And to defend...This has dragged on too long...It's time I end this" Raito finished, his smile disappearing into serious stare before bones began to spread across his body starting from his elbows, hands and his skull before encasing his body fully in thick bones in the shape of a four legged animal. The boy no longer looked human and in Chidori's eyes he no longer was, he had transformed, his appearance, his posture and even his breathing had all changed. The only thing that remained of his former self was his green eyes which watched everything from the only holes within the armor of bone. Stunned for a moment Chidori watched in silence as the beast that looked like a large white wolf with green eyes stared at him waiting for him to make a move. After a minute had passed Chidori tossed his sword upon the ceiling and began to perform handseals "Fire Style: Dragon Fire Jutsu!" Chidori shouted before spewing a deep intense stream of flame


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Post  Chidori on Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:12 am

Raito and Akane are members of a group trying to take down Imon Hitomi, the current leader and most powerful person within the sound village. Raito wants to take down Imon Hitomi in order to prevent any other monster like himself from being created for the purpose of killing. Akane wants to stop Imon Hitomi because he organize her kidnapping and experimented on her along with many other indivisuals. However the problem is many of the members are being killed by a a powerful force, unsure who or what is doing this all their members relocate to the tower to band together and eradicate the threat. Soon the threat is identified as a young man who's exact goal is unclear except the he will clear all obstacles in his path. Soon they come to the conclusion that Imon Hitomi has found out about them and their goal and has hired a skilled assassin to wipe them all out. So knowing they were more powerful together than alone, many of them gather at the bottom in the first room while the more powerful members await in the higher rooms. As the people gather at the bottom they soon realize that the assassin has already infiltrated the base. As time passes and everyone races up the stairs, the doors to the tower's entrace burst open and there stood a young boy who looked to be around thirteen years old. His eyes were a dark brown and he held two katanas, one in each hand. Without a thought he rushed within the builfding towards the stairs and with ease he made it to the second floor. There waiting for hhm was nine opponents each looking directly at him slightly stunned at his appearance. But still he continued forward before instantly stopping once hearing Akane's name. He now knew Akane was definatly here and nothing would stop him from her to her, nothing. "If you fight me, I'll kill you" he said before he could hear them begin laughing. Was it his appearance that made it funny? or Was it his possible age? or Maybe it was his choose of weapon? It had to be that, He happened to be the only person in the room not holding some kind of projectile in one of his hands. No matter, With one quick swipe of his sword the unheard joke ended and his words would be taken seriously as if coming from a serial killer. Too fast for anyone to predict or stop, the floor became coated with the blood of the man standing nearest to him, it sprayed upon all their clothing and a horrified expression on each of their faces showed their feelings all to well. Did they know the person or was it seeing something once living now dead, killed helplessly in front of them? Their expressions quickly took a drastic turn from terrified to pure rage and without a second's notice they rushed towards him not thinking if he would cut them down as easily as he had done to the man.

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Post  Chidori on Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:55 am

Chidori Vs Tetsuya Ozai

Tetsuya watched and waited for something to do, he knew he wasn't supposed to but he wanted an intruder to coe upon the mountain, someone he could face to prove his worthyness to his family. He would prove he could be a ninja and a good one at that, his Katon techniques were the best in his class even surpassing his so called genius sister. "I'll show them one day, I'll show them...its a promise" he quietly to himself as he rested on the branch of a tree as he watched the cresent moon's light luminate the area. As time flew by he could hear his mom calling out to him before the scent of smoke made its way into his nose. Something was burning and everyone on the mountain would soon know it and soon be attracted to the source but Tetsuya knew he had to make it there first before anyone else. That way he could prove himself by wiping out the intruder with no problem, quickly he backflipped up and leaped to the next tree branch, "I have to make it there before her..." he said to himself as he hopped from tree to tree before spotting a faint glow in the distance "I just have to!" Tetsuya shouted out releasing a quick burst of chakra and launching himself towards the light before crashing into it's holder who quickly rolled over and drew their sword. The crash had put the flame out and no longer did he have the chance to spot who was holiding the flame but right now it didn't matter, all that mattered was extinguishing the target before anyone else oculd arrive on the scene and steal his glory. Tetsuya smiled at the thought of what he was about to do before he felt a sharp pain across his chest before he jumped back and became more focused on the fight at hand. Tetsuya placed both his hands and began performing handseals as fast as possible before shooting a stream of flame towards his target which lit up the darkness allowing him to see what his enemy really looked like. It was a boy around his age who's eyes kept an emotionless stare as they watched him for that quick second, the boy was quick but not faster than himself. Tetsuya knew this opponent would be easy and stood no chance of winning. The boy quickly jumped up to evade the stream of flame and landed on one of the many treetops upon the mountain. Tetsuya followed, going so far as to land on the same treetop and dodged another swipe of the boy's sword. The boy was deadly but in the dark the Ozai clan were the most powerful on the mountain since they had they fire jutsu to as tetsuya liked to say, light up the dark. The boy quickly performed handseals as the boy looked towards him before firing a rather large fireball towards Tetsuya. Tetsuya held his hand out in front of flaming ball of fire before crushing it within his palm before smiling "If fire release is what you use then you're no match against me" Tetsuya said before performing a handseals.

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